Monday 22 June 2015

Time Machine Adventure

Once upon a time there were two kids called Jake and George Washington. Jake and George went on an adventure in a dark spooky cave. The cave had a crashed plane with passengers from the flight. There were only 10 people alive. The cave was dark like a jungle inside.They had a battle adventure.They had a battling trip to save the king. So they went off.

Jake had a wooden sword.And yes Jake's talent was stretching and fighting.
Jake and George set off to save the king. But it was a plan that they will play a prank on the evil person. So they went in the forest for some objects for the prank on the evil person.

But later the evil person was making a plan. around the corner was Jake and George talking away but as they heard the plan they stopped and listened to the plan. but what Jake saw was the people in plane were all
locked up. Jake was worried because they had a lot of people to capture.

But meanwhile the people on the plane were guards.Their clothing were as brown as mud and as green as a leaf. Eventually they went to go hunting for food. They had lunch they pig,lamb,and cow.

Suddenly the prank began with a SPLAT over his head. Tomato sauce all over the place. It was red as punch. They did pranks on the guards. But as they saw every time they take out five twenty more show up. Quickly they covered the whole play with pranks so when they pushed a button it all self destructed.

After that they went to see if the path was clear. “Yay!” they said, going to capture all the people in the cages. First they took all the passengers back home safe and sound.

But later during that day they went to a field where they found a portal. They went through the portal and they ended up in another story tale. It was the three bears but they didn't like the idea of the three bears. Suddenly the time machine broke down and acted all up. Jake and George got sent back to 1951. 
They could tell it was 1951 because there was a man holding a newspaper in his hand with 1951 in front of the paper. The man's name was Dan. Dan told them it was December 20 1951. Eventually they went to find someone who knows how to fix a portal of a time machine.

Meanwhile  while there was a crazy scientist that could fix anything except a portal. But Jake and George didn't need a portal to go back in time. The man that fixed the time machine was named Mike and they didn't have much time to get back home for dinner so they set off.

Back to 2006! “Yay!” they said rushing off home for dinner. So that was the END of George and Jake.

2 comments:

  1. I like my story because it's got my favorite thing in it a time machine and I enjoyed reading it. Dtroyt

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