Monday 22 June 2015

Dark Horse!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once upon a time when the dinosaurs were alive, a huge Centro was born. She lived in a desert. Her name was Avea Trotter. She was big and she was midnight black. She was the queen of Darth Desert. Also she was the first girl horse to be the ruler of the night. She had 3 powers - portals, speed and flying.


One chilling day evil Dr Frankenstein stole Avea's powers. She was mad. She was going to get her powers back. She said she needs armour and a sword. A handsome horse came alongside to keep her company. She said ,"Thank you for your support." It took them 23 days to get there and they were hot and tired.


After a long time of running in and out of caves and sleeping alone, “Tonight is the only night we can get to Dr Frankenstein.” She said to Brian, "Start unpacking mine and your bags.”


It was the first time Hanks589 a robot arm helped them unpack things. Hanks589 made some mistakes trying to make pizza for Avea and Brian for dinner at 7pm at last. 

Surprisingly Dr Frankenstein came with a tranquilizer gun in his hands and he shot Avea and Brian in the back and they fell asleep on each other.       


When they woke up they found themselves strapped on a table. They were struggling to get out. "Darn that evil Dr Frankenstein," said Avea angrily, "Without my powers I'm useless." "No!" said Brian.


Dr Frankenstein got defeated by someone else and Avea and Brian got married and lived happily ever after.

3 comments:

  1. I like your cool and exciting writing Grace. :)

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  2. I liked your story because of all your ajectives by karla.

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