Monday 15 June 2015

Alma

Once upon a time on a cold snowy day in a deserted town, there lived a little girl named Alma. She had short blond hair, a pink beanie, and a green coat, also two round blue gloves. Alma was skipping along the snowy path.

Happily she came across a black board with heaps of names on it. When Alma saw the blackboard, she saw a little bit of a white chalk so she wrote her name on the board. All of a sudden a doll popped up in a spooky shop behind her. Alma looked at it closely and it looked exactly like Alma.

After that she swiped all of the snow off the window. She really wanted that doll so she tried and tried to open that door but she couldn't. So she threw a snowball at the door. Since that didn't work, she walked away with her hand on the wall. Creak, creak! Alma heard the door open and went back to the shop.

Slowly she crept into the shop... Alma saw the doll, but suddenly she stepped on a top boy on a bike trying to escape. After that she turned back around and the doll had disappeared! Surprisingly the doll was on top of the shelf so Alma climbed on the sofa to get the doll.

Suddenly she grabbed the doll and took it outside. Next Alma transformed into the doll! Suddenly Alma was breathing heavily like never before. "Wow, I've never ever been in a doll before. This is very odd," Alma said quietly with a sad face. "Oh no!"

After a while Alma let all the dolls out of the shop. But when they all got out they started to grab something hard to SMASH the shop down! Boom! Boom! Boom! They tore the shop down. Alma and the other dolls didn't want to stay in there forever.

They prayed to God so he could help them. Suddenly when they woke up the next day, they were back to their real selves and they all became friends.

The end.




2 comments:

  1. You have used some wonderful adjectives, verbs and adverbs in your story. I love your imaginative ending.

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  2. I really liked your Alma poem by Karla

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