Monday 15 June 2015

Alma

Once upon a time on a cold winters day, a young girl named Alma was skipping along the alleyway. She had blue eyes, long hair, a blue beanie, and brown gloves. 

Alma wrote her name on the blackboard. Slowly a doll came up on the machine. Alma saw the doll just like her. Alma wanted to open the door but the door wouldn't open. Alma was upset so she threw a snowball at the door. Alma stomped angrily off. 

 Then creeeeeek! The door opened up. Alma heard the sound and she tiptoed inside. She saw lots of dolls inside the shop. Alma saw the doll on the chair. Alma want to touch the doll. 

"Ding" a little doll was riding a bike. The little doll wanted to escape. Alma saw that the doll that looked like her had disappeared. "Where is my doll?" She said. Alma struggled. she looked for the doll everywhere. 

Soon Alma saw the doll on the shelf. She tried to touch it and then... Whoosh! Alma was stuck inside the doll. She breathed heavily and looked around. Alma was trapped!


Based on 'Alma - A chilling doll story'  https://www.literacyshed.com/the-ghostly-shed.html

3 comments:

  1. I love the way you have used onomatopoeia and direct speech! Mrs A.

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  2. that is a very good way of doing a story
    from Hare

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    1. It is so nice of you to comment on our blog Hare! Mrs A.

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