Wednesday, 25 November 2015

Character Descriptions

My Nan

My Nan is about 87 years old and has short white hair. Nan can’t walk because of her legs so she has a big wheelchair. Nan has visited me about five times. She has wrinkly skin and big eyes as blue as the sky.

When she was young she survived a bombing. The first bomb went through her bedroom and exploded around 4 floors below her. Luckily a rescue ship saved her from the next bomb.

Nan has been depressed ever since my poppa died. She still has the ashes when they burned him. Nowadays Nan lives in a neat and tidy house.

My Good Mum

My good mum has brown eyes like dirt. Some mothers have curly hair but my mum has the curliest hair you've ever seen. Her skin is soft as a pillow, she has some spots on her. She has slightly brown and white skin.  

She likes to watch her favorite TV shows. It's boring. Sometimes my mum is a little grumpy but she doesn't mean it. She is very lovely because she always cares about us. She always tries to be funny, well she is. She is kind because she makes sure that I have enough food inside my tummy. She's also clever because I tell her some maths questions and she answers it. Oh and of course she's noisy and she’s a loud singer. Wow she's silly sometimes. My mum is sneaky and thankful. I love my mum, why wouldn't I.

    My Dad, Robert

My dad has greeny, bluey, grey eyes. He also has a stubble which is like a beard. We call him Rob for short. He likes wearing skeleton t shirts. He wears black converses and he has freckles. He is so hairy but do not ask me if he shaves because he's as hairy as a pink polar bear. My dad has a big puku and dark brown hair. He might be fat but he has muscles.

My dad is talented by winning Black Ops Call of Duty Ghost and others. Once he got me a bike. I had to ride it to the shops to get milk and bread. If he sees a video game he will buy it if it's on special. But right now he is in Australia.

My dad means the whole entire galaxy to me. He loves his children just like he loves candy and chocolate cake.


  1. Nice character description Jaelyn from Karla.

  2. I like your story Jaeyln. From Grace