Wednesday 3 June 2015

Once in a Lifetime

Once upon a time there was an adult called Scott who lived in an air ship. Scott liked to adventure in the air early in the morning looking for new animals that haven't been discovered by humans.

One day he was looking for new animals as usual, when he saw bits of air ship falling off. 

He thought, "I hope everything's okay down there?" He went down to see what happened when... WHOOSH!

Scott looked out his window and ... and there were thousands of graceful  flying beetles floating in the air.  WHOOSH!, FLAP!, ZOOM!

Scott wondered if he could use the beetle's shell to cover the gaps in the air ship so that it can fly again. So he lassoed the beetle and he got a bulls eye! Although he got the beetle, the rope started to snap... SNAP! So Scott made a life changing decision, it was to abandon his ship.

He leaped out of his ship and landed on a flying beetle's back.  Scott said, "So this is what it feels like to be a flying beetle!"

Suddenly they vanished into fog and... Wallah! They were at the Amazon rainforest in forest land! Then the strangest thing happened to Scott... He felt the warm hug of a beetle! He had made a special bond with the beetle! Scott called the beetle Dylan.

From now on Scott lives with Dylan in the treehouse they made together. They play fetch, catch the rope, and water fight. And they lived happily ever after!

                                                The End!

13 comments:

  1. I like your story because you used a lot of onomatopoeia. Netani

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    1. ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm what does onomatopoeia mean netani

      by brendon :()

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    2. It Means words like BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. I like your writing Lachlan.It has lots of adgitives.grace

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  3. I like your story Lachlan

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  4. Wow Lachlan! Dad and I think your story is great. You are becoming a wonderful author. VERY proud!!
    Mum.

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    1. Maybe i'll be as good as Andy Griffiths.

      Lachlan

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  5. Grandma & Grandad15 June 2015 at 20:23

    That's a cool story. Very imaginative and well written

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    1. Thank you for your nice comments. Lachlan.

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  6. I loved reading your lively, imaginative story! Excellent use of direct speech and punctuation!

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  7. hello lachlan and mrs armitage. I love the story

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