Wednesday 3 June 2015

Once in a Lifetime

On a sunny afternoon there was an old man named Lachlan. He was in a diamond ship with a balloon up the top. He was flying slowly up the blue sky.


While he was pulling a rope part of the ship broke! Now he couldn't move anywhere. But then he heard a noise. He got his telescope and looked closely. Suddenly he found some gigantic green flying turtles. They were gliding like hawks. When he saw the gigantic green flying turtles an idea popped into his mind. He had a rope and tied a circle with the rope. He lassoed the turtle like a cowboy. "Yeeeeeeehaaaaaaaa!" His brilliant idea worked. The turtle was moving the ship.


Suddenly the turtle was shaking and flapping it's wings. But unfortunately when it was shaking it broke the rope. The old man was depressed!  Luckily, he saw another gigantic green flying turtle. As  the turtle flew beside his ship he leaped of the edge of the boat and landed on the turtle's shell.


He looked up and breathed through the air. When he looked down he saw the land. He was ecstatic! Surprisingly he heard the turtles talk. So he asked them if he could get dropped off at his house.

                                                              The End

4 comments:

  1. I like your simile and the way you included some direct speech in your imaginative story! Mrs A.

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  2. I wish I could ride a turtle like Lachlan.... what an exciting story!

    Mrs Smith.

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  3. I like my story because I did my paragraphs very well. Netani

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  4. nice story netani what a exciting story from Daman

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